Showing posts with label Christmas. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Christmas. Show all posts

Friday, December 6, 2024

It's a Christmas Mystery!

Susanna Leonard Hill is hosting her annual holiday writing contest. You can enter your teeny tiny story on her blog from today until December 8, 2024. Your story for kids (12 and under) must be 250 words or less, include some kind of mystery, and be clearly a December holiday story.  It can be rhyming or prose and needs to include a main character and a true story arc.  The following is my entry.  

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WHO STOLE THE STAR?

By Rebekah Hoeft

250 WORDS


The door was shut. Windows closed. No fireplace. No way for anyone to get inside the mice’s cozy cottage without being noticed.


*     *     *     *     *


On their porch, Babs and Bink drank cocoa. They watched the stars and snow twinkle. When they went inside, everything seemed as it should. The woodstove warmed the room. The Christmas tree, decked in lights, gingerbread ornaments, and popcorn strings, glowed in front of the window. Their supper, roasting in the oven, smelled delicious. 


But then Babs squeaked, pointing to the tree. “Where’s our star!?”


“Maybe it fell?” Binks wondered.


The mice scampered around the tree.


No star.


Babs slumped into her arm chair. “We worked so hard. The star was our masterpiece.”


Bink nodded. “It still is! We’ll find it, Babs.” 


The two mice sat staring at their tree. Bink pulled a cookie from her pocket, nibbling while thinking about the mystery of the missing star. She muttered to herself. “A thief? But how? Elves? Santa? Too soon.” 


Babs looked at her sister. She blinked. “Bink?”


No response. Bink munched, lost in thought. Silvery sprinkles stuck to her whiskers.


“BINK!”


Bink jumped.  “What!?”


“Whatcha eating?”


“Oh. A cookie. You know eating helps me think. I’m gonna solve this mystery.”


“Where’d you get it, Bink?”


“Hmm? Oh. From my pocket. I found it before we went outside.”


“Found it? Where?”


“On the floor by— BABS! Our star! I found it!”


Babs laughed. “Yes, you did. Case closed… as long as you don’t eat any more of the decorations!”


Monday, December 9, 2019

Susanna Leonard Hill's 9th Annual Holiday Contest - Merry and Bright


Susanna Leonard Hill, author, blogger, and chocolate lover, has given her annual holiday challenge:  write a teensy tiny holiday story.  Here are the basic rules if you want to play along:

-Story must have a clear holiday theme
-Story must be about a treat 
-Story must be no longer than 250 words
-Story must be for kids 12 years old and younger

Post your story on your blog and go to Susanna's site between December 9-11 and give her your story-specific link (or copy and paste your story in her comment section).

Happy Christmas and happy writing!

Merry and Bright
by Rebekah Hoeft
250 words

You'd think Christmas Eve on the tippy-top of the world would be merry and bright.  But Christmastime in Christmastown is covered in cold darkness.  The only light comes from what stars and moon peek through the clouds.  This Christmas, not even the moon showed its face.

Grumpy Christmastown elves, wishing for their cozy homes and well-deserved naps, were not cheered by Abner’s letter. 

Tomkin waved his lantern around, casting strange shadows on the other elves.  “Abner said there’d be something splendid out here.  All I see is dark...and a little more dark after that...wait...I see something.  Oop.  More dark.”

Pierette said, “Tomkin, Abner never lies.  If he said we’ll have a treat tonight, we will.” 

The elves agreed and huddled together, passing the time with elf song and stories.

After hours of waiting, elves started taking stealthy steps back home until Tomkin gasped and pointed at a glimmer growing in the sky.  Soon, it looked as if the sun had decided to wake from its sleep.  Brightly colored packages dropped, gliding to the ground on shimmering parachutes.  The elves scampered to open them:

“Candy canes!” 

“Cotton candy!” 

“Chocolate covered carrots!”  

—all the makings for a fine elf feast. 

The last parachute floated down, carrying a giant lantern and another letter:

Dear Ones,
You worked hard this year!
Enjoy your feast!
Love,
Abner
Head Elf,
Delivery Division

And so they did and all were merry and bright, even in the darkest, most tippy-top part of the world.






Monday, December 11, 2017

Sweet Hopeful Hymns We Sing


Yesterday and the day before, I posted about Susanna Leonard Hill's Annual Holiday Contests.  Today, guess what?  I'm posting about Susanna Leonard Hill's Annual Holiday Contests. 

This entry was from last year's contest--a Twelve Days of Christmas-esque Christmas hymn homage.  Say that 12 times fast.

Again, not a winner.  Again, fun to write.

Sweet Hopeful Hymns We Sing

In the days before Christmas, sweet hopeful hymns we sing
Preparing for the Advent of Our King.

In the days before Christmas, sweet hopeful hymns we sing:
Come, Emmanuel
Preparing for the Advent of Our King.

In the days before Christmas, sweet hopeful hymns we sing:
Savior, Come
Come, Emmanuel
Preparing for the Advent of Our King.

In the days before Christmas, sweet hopeful hymns we sing
Lift Up Your Heads
Savior, Come
Come, Emmanuel
Preparing for the Advent of Our King.

In the days before Christmas, sweet hopeful hymns we sing
Hark the Glad Sound!
Lift Up Your Heads
Savior, Come
Come, Emmanuel
Preparing for the Advent of Our King.

In the days before Christmas, sweet hopeful hymns we sing
Come, Expected Jesus
Hark the Glad Sound!
Lift up Your Heads
Savior, Come
Come, Emmanuel
Preparing for the Advent of Our King.

In the days before Christmas, sweet hopeful hymns we sing
In the Bleak Midwinter
Once in David’s City
Come, Expected Jesus
Hark the Glad Sound!
Lift Up Your Heads
Savior, Come
Come, Emmanuel
Preparing for the Advent of Our King.

In the days before Christmas, sweet hopeful hymns we sing
Away in the Manger
In a Little Stable
In the Bleak Midwinter
Once in David’s City
Come, Expected Jesus
Hark the Glad Sound!
Lift Up Your Heads
Savior, Come
Come, Emmanuel
Preparing for the Advent of Our King.

In the days before Christmas, sweet hopeful hymns we sing
Oh Come All Ye Faithful
Joy to the World
Away in the Manger
In a Little Stable
In the Bleak Midwinter
Once in David’s City
Come Expected Jesus
Hark the Glad Sound!
Lift Up Your Heads
Savior, Come
Come, Emmanuel
Preparing for the Advent of Our King.

©2016 Rebekah Hoeft

Saturday, December 9, 2017

Susanna Leonard Hill's 7th Annual Holiday Contest - Travelin' Blues


Susanna Leonard Hill, author, blogger, friend to the groundhog, and lover of chocolate, hosts a writing contest a few times a year at her blog.  I've entered a couple of them and find her challenges very...challenging.  Because there's a word limit.  A teensy-tiny limit.  


250 words.  She thinks that is better than her Halloween challenge that was 100 words or less. 

Yes.  250 words is better than 100.  But still. Fitting a complete-ish story arc with a main character-ish into 250 words is a wee bit of a challenge.  

I  wrote and cut and felt cruel and my poor little story was screaming but I showed no mercy and did the necessary and ended up with a 250 word story.  Whew.  

Don't you feel inspired and full of Christmas cheer after that?

Happy Christmas.


Travelin' Blues

We’re travelers.  

Mom writes books about different cultures.  We’re home for a bit while we catch up with friends and school work.  Then -- off again!

The only time this is a problem is Christmas.  Every year, a new place.  I just want to be home.

This is how it goes before Christmas:

“Mama, can we go home for Christmas?”

“Not this year, Kels.  This year we’re going to [insert name of faraway country].”

And then we’re off. 

I’ve gotta admit we’ve been part of amazing Christmas celebrations.

When I was seven, fireworks and ice cream in Brazil:  spectacular!

Thirteen desserts in France.  YESSS!

A sauna on Christmas Eve in Estonia:    interesting?!

Last year, two Christmases.
Iceland in December:  books and pretty fried bread.  Perfection.
Ethiopia in January:  4:00 a.m. candlelight procession.  Intense.

This year, I’ve had it.  I wanna go home.

We’re in Australia.  I say, with grump:

“Mom.  Let’s go home for Christmas.”

She just gave a tired smile and kept typing.

Grrr.

Today we’re off to wherever we’re going.  Don’t care where.

We’re late, rushing to get settled with our flight standbys:  earbuds, neck pillows, books.  Mom pulls out a gift bag.

“Open it.”

I know it must be her buttering me up for another traveling Christmas. 

As the flight attendant says “...and then straight to the States,” I read the words “DTW” at the end of the printed itinerary that was in the bag.  Detroit.  Michigan.  Home.  Heaven on earth.

“Surprise,” Mom says quietly.


Best. Christmas. Ever.

©2017 Rebekah Hoeft

Edited:
I was a finalist!!  Out of the 10 finalists, I came in...10th.  

😁

I was very happy to recieve  a set of "What's the Story" cards from Susanna--thank you!!  

There's a desription and pictures of them on her site here.  You can order them by emailing her.  They would be great for classrooms or for writers who sometimes need a little push to get started.  My package also arrived with chocolate, because Susanna.  


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