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Showing posts with label short story. Show all posts

Friday, December 6, 2024

It's a Christmas Mystery!

Susanna Leonard Hill is hosting her annual holiday writing contest. You can enter your teeny tiny story on her blog from today until December 8, 2024. Your story for kids (12 and under) must be 250 words or less, include some kind of mystery, and be clearly a December holiday story.  It can be rhyming or prose and needs to include a main character and a true story arc.  The following is my entry.  

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WHO STOLE THE STAR?

By Rebekah Hoeft

250 WORDS


The door was shut. Windows closed. No fireplace. No way for anyone to get inside the mice’s cozy cottage without being noticed.


*     *     *     *     *


On their porch, Babs and Bink drank cocoa. They watched the stars and snow twinkle. When they went inside, everything seemed as it should. The woodstove warmed the room. The Christmas tree, decked in lights, gingerbread ornaments, and popcorn strings, glowed in front of the window. Their supper, roasting in the oven, smelled delicious. 


But then Babs squeaked, pointing to the tree. “Where’s our star!?”


“Maybe it fell?” Binks wondered.


The mice scampered around the tree.


No star.


Babs slumped into her arm chair. “We worked so hard. The star was our masterpiece.”


Bink nodded. “It still is! We’ll find it, Babs.” 


The two mice sat staring at their tree. Bink pulled a cookie from her pocket, nibbling while thinking about the mystery of the missing star. She muttered to herself. “A thief? But how? Elves? Santa? Too soon.” 


Babs looked at her sister. She blinked. “Bink?”


No response. Bink munched, lost in thought. Silvery sprinkles stuck to her whiskers.


“BINK!”


Bink jumped.  “What!?”


“Whatcha eating?”


“Oh. A cookie. You know eating helps me think. I’m gonna solve this mystery.”


“Where’d you get it, Bink?”


“Hmm? Oh. From my pocket. I found it before we went outside.”


“Found it? Where?”


“On the floor by— BABS! Our star! I found it!”


Babs laughed. “Yes, you did. Case closed… as long as you don’t eat any more of the decorations!”


Sunday, February 13, 2022

Get Well Soon, Mrs. Love -- Susanna Leonard Hill's 2022 Valentiny Contest




It's contest time over at Susanna Leonard Hill's blog. The rules?  Write a tiny story with a Valentine theme where a character feels pride. And keep it to 214 words or less.

I wrote a story about some kids who worked hard on Valentine presents for their teacher, who has to miss the classroom party becausw she's sick.

♥️ ♥️ ♥️

Get Well Soon, Mrs. Love
214 words

“Mrs. Love shouldn’t miss our party AND presents,” Ingrid said indignantly.

Omar agreed. “We worked hard on her gifts. Could you deliver them?”

Everyone looked at me, knowing I lived on our teacher’s street. I felt nervous but to cheer her up, I agreed.

On the way, I practiced the poem I’d written. I knocked, holding out the box of gifts when she tiredly opened the door.

Shyly I stammered, “…H-h-happy Valentine’s Day.

Bertha and Bree made a card with pink beads.
Eve shaped a heart for your birds with some seeds.

Omar and Oak wrote a Valentine’s joke.
Ume’s heart sculpture was great (till it broke).
Rue drew a lovebug so cute and so weird.

Von’s homemade chocolate has – GASP! – disappeared.
Anamaria recorded a song.
Lex penned a letter but spelled your name wrong.
Elle made a crown with those jewels that stick.
Neal’s heart is HEAVY with paint smeared on thick.
Tula thought tulips would be your delight.
Ingrid felt strongly that roses were right.
None of us like that you’re out with the flu.
Each of our presents say we sure love you!"

Mrs. Love beamed. “I’ve never been more happy to be your teacher. Thank you.”

She waved and I walked away, bursting with pride that we’d made her smile.

♥️ ♥️ ♥️


If you missed this year's contest, try out Susanna's other holiday writing contests in October and December.  

Happy Valentine's Day!

Thursday, October 29, 2020

Susanna Leonard Hill's Halloweensie 2020: Scarlett Skeleton

Scarlett Skeleton

100 words

Scarlett Skeleton hid in the shadowy dark behind a shed, teeth click-clacking as she sobbed.  The shouts of trick-or-treaters echoed around her.


Footsteps crept close. A cat-masked face peeked around the corner.


“Hi!  I’m Casey.  Why are you sad?”


Scarlett sighed, showing her empty bucket.  “Parents shriek and throw hard candy at me, which rattles right through me.  I want treats; they think I’m the trick.”


Casey said, “That is sad.  Would you like some of my taffy? It's delicious and will stick to your ribs."


Scarlett nodded thankfully, happy to have found a sweet treat and a sweet friend


©️ 2020 Rebekah Hoeft



It's Halloweensie time over at Susanna Leonard Hill's blog! Here's what how she explains it:


"The Contest: write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (children here defined as 12 and under) (title not included in the 100 words), using the words skeleton, creep, and mask.  Your story can be scary, funny, sweet, or anything in between, poetry or prose, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words and is 100 words (you can go under, but not over!)  Get it?  Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people ðŸ™‚"


For more details on how to submit your own story or to read other entries, head to her Susanna's Halloweensie blog post.


Thanks. Susanna, for another fun prompt!


Saturday, October 27, 2018

Susanna Leonard Hill's Teensie Tiny Halloweensie Story Contest - The Plan

Susanna Leonard Hill is hosting her 8th Annual Halloweensie story contest. Head to her site or to the bottom of this post for more information.


The Plan
100 words
by Rebekah Hoeft

Princess stirs the bubbling concoction.  In the flickering firelight, her tarnished crown and tattered dress look eerily royal.

Jester and Bear arrive as something howls in the dusky distance. The group shivers and huddles by the fire.

"All is as planned," Princess says. "None will resist."

Concerned, Bear peers into the cauldron.  "Will there be enough, you think?"

Jester cackles. "Of course! Princess plots perfectly.”   

A lone figure emerges out of the shadowed woods. 

“Look. It begins."

"Trick-or-treat?" Mouse says timidly.

Princess smiles kindly.  "Welcome. Come. Warm yourself.”  


She offers Mouse a cup of cocoa. “Nice costume, Keith.  Happy Halloween!”

© October 2018  Rebekah Hoeft


Per usual, Susanna's rules are simple:
1.  Super teeny tiny story:  100 words or less.
2.  Use the words cauldron, shiver, and howls.
3.  Have a main character and story arc.
4.  Tell a story that is clearly about Halloween.
5.  Write well, with readers age 12 and under in mind.

Head on over to her site  to join in as a reader or writer (stories due by October 31 at 11:59 p.m.).

Edit (Sunday, October 28):  This morning, I realized I hadn't read Susasanas whole blog post.

So I read it.

Gulp.

I found what I am sure every writer dreads most...that the story you wrote and slashed at and muttered over has already been written.  By someone else.  And worse, that someone else is the person you are submitting your work to. 

In a nutshell, Susanna's example 100-word story is about a group with a plan gathered at the edge of town (in the woods, maybe?) around a fire on a Halloween night with a cauldron filled with hot cocoa. 

Susanna's is a 20-line rhyming poem.  My original was a 16-line rhyming poem.  I liked it, but it didn't emphasize a character enough or feel like it had a story arc. So I canned it but kept the basic idea. 

Our stories ARE different stories.  A witch MC vs. a Princess MC.  Cocoa motives are different.  But still.  I cringe.   But leave it 'cause writing 100-word stories is darn hard.  Plus, it's report card, parent teacher conference week.   

So, Susanna, if you've read this far, my apologies for inadvertent plagiarism.  Great minds think alike?! 


Susanna Leonard Hill's 11th Annual Valentiny Contest

This year, Susanna Leonard Hill's Valentiny Contest required its contestants to write 214 (or less) word stories for children where som...